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Filed under: Uncategorized — paolafms63 at 11:11 pm on Saturday, October 23, 2010

Lovingly Alice

Phillis Reynolds Naylor

My story would be a fantasy story.I last read in page 47 and it was enough information in that.I so far have read that Alice’s dad told her that there was good years and bad years.Alice thought it was sorda right because her brother’s birthday had lemon cake and she hated that.Alice’s mother died when she was in kindergarten.The third thing that happened was that one of her very best friends moved away.Her best friends name was Sara.They didn’t have no more fun since Sara left their school.Alice knew she had to find Sara.When Sara was walking home with Donald he told Alice that they kicked Sara out of her house.He said that because they didn’t pay their rent.When Sara got home she told her dad and her dad said that if that was the real reason they might be living in a tent or in their car.In the morning Alice had the crazy idea to go look for Sara.So she actuallywent witha friend.They went to look around a alley and they saw lots of tents.They yelled out her name but she didnt answer them.Then an old man told them something that they couldn’t understand.They got scared and ran off.They said that they could not be looking for her for their rest of their lifes.They stopped looking for her and said to each other that they would always misser.               THE END!!!!!!!!!!

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Filed under: Uncategorized — paolafms63 at 11:51 am on Monday, October 11, 2010

Valentine princess

Cabot,meg

My book  is about  fantasy and it seems as real as it can be.I stopped reading in page 34 and I got lots of information of  it.So far I have read that .Mia couldn`t find her journal.They were going to Genovia at the end of the summer.She didn`t want to leave without  her journal.Then her mom Helen  said is this it.Mia said no but she did say it was her journal that she had a year and a half  ago.She couldn`t wait to read it.Since they were leaving  to Genovia for the summer she decided to read it over there so she won`t get bored.She  hadn`t remembered what she had written in it.Finally they were leaving in the limo and she thouth that the first thing she would do is build her tent and go inside and read her journal.She would be reading it with a snack and a drink.              THE END!!!!!

Rainbow flavored ice cream

Filed under: Uncategorized — paolafms63 at 8:11 pm on Tuesday, September 28, 2010

If I was an ice cream flavor I would choose  rainbow, because it has lots of flavors.Also because I like the bright colors and the rainbow colors.I think that some of the bright colors are sour too.Instead of just having  one flavor you should have like 3 or more.So when you taste rainbow you should taste more than 1.Lets say Rainbow  has lemon,rasberry,apple,and blue rasberry.That would be delicious to taste lots of flavors.I think that rainbow,when you look at it,it will look delicious.The first time I saw rainbow  flavor guess what happened.It became my favorite of all the flavors .Who would not like rainbow flavor.I mean it just has so many flavors.Everybody I know likes it.Some rainbows have more than 5 flavors.I always have to  have to have rainbow at my house no matter what!        THE END!

Hello world!

Filed under: Uncategorized — paolafms63 at 7:45 am on Monday, August 30, 2010

I am a 11 year old girl that lives in Yakima. I like to read interesting books and sometimes scary ones. I do my homework everyday even if some days I don’t want to.When I grow up I am thinking to be a doctor or maybe a singer.I have a sister that is 12 years old.Also a brother that is 14 years old.I have 1 dog named Snoopie, he is so cute. One more dog named Qoqueta. Qoqueta is a girl and Snoopie is a boy.In my family we have 5 people. I always like to be in style. I have a loving  family.I like playing sports,like basketball.I like all the animals but my favorite is a dog.I like to visit other places over the world.I want to go to New York when I grow up.                              THE  END!!!!!